you live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problem with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, 1. describe the situation 2. explain your problems and why it is difficult to work 3. say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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John, I am writing

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letter in regards to the

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where I am residing at the moment. I am a final year student of Masters of management (level 9). I am staying in blooms building,

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number 324 across the college. Recently, a new student has moved into my

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and

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person seems to be very chaotic to deal with. She never keeps the

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clean and always barge into the

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in the middle of

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and is really very noisy.

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I tried to conversate with her regarding the issue,

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her

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have been very disrespectful. As I am in my final year, I have

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of assignments to work on and for

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I need

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and quiet environment. My sleep pattern has

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been interrupted with the arrival of

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. In order to curb the present

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I am planning to change my

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so that

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could concentrate more on my studies and can get good sleep. I am in

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for a single

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occupancy, where there is no disturbance.

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focusing on getting the

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nearby the campus, which could help me to commute easily. I hope you would look into the situation. Yours Faithfully, Neethu Babu