you live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problem with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, 1. describe the situation 2. explain your problems and why it is difficult to work 3. say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear
Mr.
John,
I am writing Change the punctuation
Mr
this
letter in regards to the room
where I am residing at the moment. I am a final year student of Masters of management (level 9). I am staying in blooms building, room
number 324 across the college. Recently, a new student has moved into my room
and this
person seems to be very chaotic to deal with. She never keeps the room
clean and always barge into the room
in the middle of night
and is really very noisy.
Add an article
the night
Although
I tried to conversate with her regarding the issue, but
her Remove the conjunction
apply
demanor
have been very disrespectful. As I am in my final year, I have Correct your spelling
demeanour
plethora
of assignments to work on and for Add an article
a plethora
that
I need Add a comma
,that
calm
and quiet environment. My sleep pattern has Add an article
a calm
also
been interrupted with the arrival of this
new room-mate
. In order to curb the present Correct your spelling
roommate
scenario
I am planning to change my Add a comma
,scenario
room
,
so that Remove the comma
apply
i
could concentrate more on my studies and can get good sleep.
I am in Change the capitalization
I
look
for a single Add an article
the look
room
occupancy, where there is no disturbance. Similarly
I am Add a comma
,Similarly
also
focusing on getting the accomodation
nearby the campus, which could help me to commute easily. I hope you would look into the situation.
Yours Faithfully,
Neethu BabuCorrect your spelling
accommodation
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