you live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problem with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, 1. describe the situation 2. explain your problems and why it is difficult to work 3. say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Dear
Mr.
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John, I am writing
this
letter in regards to the
room
where I am residing at the moment. I am a final year student of Masters of management (level 9). I am staying in blooms building,
room
number 324 across the college. Recently, a new student has moved into my
room
and
this
person seems to be very chaotic to deal with. She never keeps the
room
clean and always barge into the
room
in the middle of
night
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and is really very noisy.
Although
I tried to conversate with her regarding the issue,
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her
demanor
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demeanour
have been very disrespectful. As I am in my final year, I have
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of assignments to work on and for
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I need
calm
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and quiet environment. My sleep pattern has
also
been interrupted with the arrival of
this
new
room-mate
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. In order to curb the present
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I am planning to change my
room
,
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so that
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could concentrate more on my studies and can get good sleep. I am in
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for a single
room
occupancy, where there is no disturbance.
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I am
also
focusing on getting the
accomodation
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accommodation
nearby the campus, which could help me to commute easily. I hope you would look into the situation. Yours Faithfully, Neethu Babu
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accommodation officer
  • roommate
  • share a room
  • living arrangement
  • difficult to work
  • noise levels
  • study environment
  • privacy concerns
  • alternative accommodation
  • single room
  • academic performance
  • well-being
  • respectfully request
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