the graphs shows the international users of internet from 2010 to 2017.

The graphs illustrate the usage of

internet

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by the Denny Johns between the years 2010 and 2017 and the percentage of web customers in the world in 2018 .The data has been calibrated in millions.

Overall

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,the number of web customers were rising during the period,

whereas

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in the USA and

Canada

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,Canada

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the maximum percentage of people were using the

internet

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in 2008. In 2010, worldwide

internet

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purchasers were evaluated

around

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at around

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26 million which

were

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was

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increasing gradually up to the year 2014 at 195 million.After that, a sudden escalation was seen in the

internet

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operators in the years 2014 and 2015.

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, there was seen an increment in

internet

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service consumers from 2015 to 2017. Turning to a pie chart, the US and Canada consumed the maximum proportion of the

internet

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in 2018.

moreover

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, the number of people using the

internet

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in Europe was less than a quarter of the total users in the world.

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, Asia, the Pacific and South America collectively contributed more than 1/5 of the total percentage,

whereas

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the Middle East and Africa had the least

internet

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users in 2018.

manav mittal

Aug 8, 2021

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