Some people say that the amount of noise that people make should be strictly controlled. Others say that people should be free to make as much noise as they wish. Write both view and your opinion

The people around the world are fond of celebrations and making

noise

is an indispensable part of these celebrations.

However

, many believe that generating

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amount of

noise

should be controlled. In my opinion, there is no specific need to control the freedom of

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individuals to celebrate.

To begin

with, festivals are an inseparable part of our culture. There

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a myriad of festivals that we celebrate annually. Using the

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and high volume musical instruments are unavoidable

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these occasions and it generates tremendous

noise

.

For instance

, during the new year

night

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the crowd welcomes the novel year with a plethora of enthusiasm and

noise

.

Moreover

, they

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high voice to express their emotions.

Also

, while partying,the youths play highly noisy music to get into that elevated mood, which creates a joyful atmosphere.

On the other hand

, there are fewer disadvantages of

such

vocal disturbances.

Firstly

, the high decibel volume created by the horn and the engine of the vehicles

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air pollution. The repercussion is,

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the community

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might have to face mental and physical illness if they are constantly exposed to

such

polluted air.

For example

, a survey conducted

last

year the New york city illustrated that approximately 10

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of the crowd suffering from

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hearing loss is caused by

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noise

pollution. In conclusion, I would like to iterate that, even though there are negligible drawbacks while producing the

noise

, the merits overshadow the demerits. I do believe that

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society should be given

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to express

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emotions and make

those special moment

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memorable by making noises.