Some people belive that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Society always provides us comfort and knowledge of our culture and etiquettes. It is our job to give them something in return. So there is a school of thought who

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that

younger

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the younger

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generation

should do some of society's

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voluntarily and for free as it will not only help our community but

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in the development of our youth. I personally completely agree with

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thought and

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will shed my views on

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, our communities always

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various organisations which helps people in

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.

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as

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providing food to homeless people or old age houses or orphanages etc.

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,

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organisations

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runs

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on donations and trust funds which always keeps them

short handed

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. In

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case, when teenagers apply for doing

work

here voluntarily and for free it will not only

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them to improve their behaviours but it

also

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relief to

such

organisations as they don't have to hire

personnels

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personnel

to do

work

for them.

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, when

younger

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the younger

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generation

starts working with

such

communities it helps them to develop character.

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, it develops

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of helping others, aware

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problems in society and it creates

consience

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conscience

confidence

in themselves.

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in their

teen

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it helps them to keep them busy and away from other distractions. Namely, it keeps them away from drug abuse, violence etc.

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people in their

teen age

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are always competitive in every

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so when they start

work

here they can compete with each other and get more and more

work

done. Not only that but they set good examples and

also

create perfect good role models for their

generation

and the

generation

next

. To sum up, I reiterate that

this communities

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should come up with some kind of rewards to motivate children who

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good

work

without any desire to get anything in return. Not but least it will help them to bring

communitiy

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community

communities

closer and understand it's problems at deeper levels.