In some countries people who visit art galleries are reducing. What are the reasons for this? How can this problem be solved?

Art
is an important aspect of many
countires
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countries
culture
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.Earlier
PEOPLE
USED TO TRAVEL
ART
GALLARY
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GALLERY
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BUT AS TIME PASSES THE NUMBER OF
PEOPLE
'S VISITS IS REDUCING.THE
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RELEVANT
REASONS
OF
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THIS
NOTION WILL BE DISCUSSED IN
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PARAGRAPHS.
TO BEGIN
WITH, IN
THIS
CONTEMPORARY ERA EVERYTHING IS GETTING ADVANCED AND HANDY.
PEOPLE
WHO
LOVES
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TO DO
ART
ARE PRESENTING THEMSELVES ON DIGITAL PLATFORM.THE
AUDIANCE
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AUDIENCE
WHO ADMIRE
ART
,
ALSO
FOLLOWS THEIR
IDOLE
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IDOL
IDOLS
ON THAT STAGE.
FOR INSTANCE
, IN
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PENDAMIC
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PANDEMIC
SITUATION
PEOPLES
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PEOPLE
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ARE NOT ADVISED TO
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STEP
OUT AND GATHER.
HENCE
, CREATORS SHOWCASE THEIR
ART
ONLINE.
THIS
IS
THE
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ONE OF THE REASONS
OF
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LOW
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THE LOW
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FOOTFALL TOWARDS THE
ART
NOWDAYS
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.
ALTHOUGH
THERE IS A
PENDAMIC
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PANDEMIC
SITUATION,SOME COUNTRIES ARE MANAGING TO RUN
THIS
GALLARIES
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GALLERIES
BY
FOLLWING
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FOLLOWING
SAFETY MEASURES.
MOREOVER
, IN MY VIEW TO SUPPORT
THIS
ART
GALLARIES
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GALLERIES
GOVERMENT
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GOVERNMENT
MUST INTERVENE AND ENCOURAGE CREATORS TO PRESENT THEIR CREATIVITY BY PROVIDING
SCHOLERSHIP
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SCHOLARSHIP
SCHOLARSHIPS
. BY DOING
THIS
NOT ONLY THE
ART
GALLARIES
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GALLERIES
WILL BE IN TREND BUT
ALSO
THE ARTIST WILL GET INSPIRATION ABOUT THEIR WORK.
IN
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RESULT
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A RESULT
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,
PEOPLE
WILL COME TO SEE THE
ART
PHYSICALLY AS IT IS PROMOTED BY
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THE GOVERNMENT
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. BY CONCLUDING THE SAME,
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EVEN THOUGH
THE CREATIVITY ARE GOING ON ONLINE PLATFORM,BY SOME WAYS WE CAN STILL MAKE IT FOR ITS PHYSICAL VALUES.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • digital era
  • online galleries
  • allure
  • economic factors
  • cultural pursuits
  • societal interests
  • innovative
  • engaging exhibitions
  • virtual reality (VR) experiences
  • accessible
  • contemporary
  • promote
  • art education
  • awareness
  • foster
  • appreciation
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