Teenagers should not be allowed to use mobile phones in schools. Do you agree or disagree? Give explanations and examples for your response.
Most
of
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school
children have mobile Add an article
the school
phones
these days. Some people
think that teenagers should not be allowed to use
them in schools. I agree with this
idea because mobile phones
may disturb their studies, reduce their time
to interact with friends, and have negative
impact on their health.
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a negative
To begin
with, students
cannot concentrate on their study
if they can Fix the agreement mistake
studies
use
mobile phones
during the lectures. They can get notices of apps when they get messages from friends and some students
may cares
too much Change the verb form
care
on
them when they are waiting for replies from others. Change preposition
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For instance
, the recent survey shows that junior high school
students
who do not bring their phones
to their own study rooms have higher scores at
the exam than Change preposition
on
people
who bring. Therefore
, though mobile phones
are sometimes useful for study, it is clear that it has a negative impact on their grades.
Furthermore
, school
is the place not only teaching some subjects, such
as math or English,
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also
teaching the
moral and the communication skill. Using Correct article usage
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mobile
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a mobile
phone
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phones
school
increases students
’ time
to spend by themselves, for example
watching YouTube or social media, and communicating skill
will not be improved. There is Fix the agreement mistake
skills
a
research which shows that Correct article usage
apply
people
who spent their school
days with friends tend to be less get angry than people
who had shorter time
with Add an article
a friend
friend
. Fix the agreement mistake
friends
Thus
, it is beneficial for students
to spend much more time
with their classmates, not phones
.
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on phones
last
, it is not good for their health, especially eyes
. Mobile Correct pronoun usage
their eyes
phones
emit radiation called blue light, and it affects eyes
negatively. Recently, there are blue cut glasses which can cut 70% of those light, but without these glasses, it is said that Correct article usage
the eyes
people
have more possibilities to get some eye disease when they get older than 50. Therefore
, school
should limit their Add an article
the school
a school
time
to use
devices during their day
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daytime
time
.
In conclusion, although
there are a lot of students
who has their own mobile phones
, I agree with the idea that they shouldn’t use
at
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them at
school
, since it has bad influences on their grades, communication skills and health.Submitted by yu_obayashi on
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