Teenagers should not be allowed to use mobile phones in schools. Do you agree or disagree? Give explanations and examples for your response.
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are sometimes useful for study, it is clear that it has a negative impact on their grades.
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people
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people
have more possibilities to get some eye disease when they get older than 50. Use synonyms
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.
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