Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want.Is this a good way to raise children?What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?

Having
parents
who provide everything according to our demands is always a blessing.But in my ,opinion it is not a good
way
to raise their child.Because
this
can lead
children
into a dark
future
and can make their behaviour so disgusting and unacceptable in public .So, here I will through some light on the cross of
this
topic. So ; if
parents
want to raise their
children
in a positive manner
such
as well behaved and respect giving . They have to learn the art of saying no to unenissial things to their
children
.If anyone is trying to push above their boundaries
parents
should be denied
this
. That will help in the development of self-control in them.In my point of view ,on the opposite ,side the
parents
how never deny anything and fulfil every demand are just making their child's
future
full of troubles. Due to them their child never gets the habit of listening NO. which show their result in
future
. The
children
of indulgent
parents
are likely to have many negative manners in their personalities. The
first
and most dangerous is that these
children
become self-decision decision-makers and want all control over their and
parents
life,
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they make it so difficult for their
parents
to take any kind of design regarding their studies,sports and any other personalised thing.The
second
thing is that they are very impulsive. the person which was never in any boundaries and never heard NO for anything in life has to the bi lake in patience which results in a lack of maturity in the
future
.
for example
unnecessary shopping in critical financial conditions. In the
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there are many
parents
following that
way
of parenting .But I believe that's not the
way
of doing it and may lead their
children
into and dark and unemployed
future
.
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  • indulgent
  • entitlement
  • discipline
  • responsibility
  • nurturing
  • self-reliance
  • adversity
  • autonomy
  • validation
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