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Tourism has negative environmental impacts on Tourist area. What are these impacts? How can damaging impacts be lessened?

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Now a days
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, as part of
the
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globalisation,
number
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a number
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 of concerns has been raised in
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environment
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the environment
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. One of the major
effect
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effects
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 is problems
occured
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occurred
 due to the arrival of
tourism
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.
Ecosystem
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The ecosystem
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 of that particular
area
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 suffers
with
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the
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 result of the
non execution
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non-execution
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 of
tourism
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 in
proper
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 way.
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assay
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essay
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 explains these environmental effects and the measures to overcome that as well. There are a number of impacts on the same.
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, the problems due to pollution are arising day by day in the
environment
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as a result
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 of
tourism
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.
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 is because there is no proper management for the disposal of waste materials when the incoming of tourists has been increased.
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, snacks and drinks which are available in these areas are well packed in plastic containers. After consuming foods
people
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 are throwing
a packings
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 carelessly without concerning the ecosystem.
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, another major concern of
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environment
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the environment
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as a result
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 of
tourism
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 is
jeopardization
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the jeopardization
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 of
habitat
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the habitat
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 of that specific
area
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. For increasing the facilities for tourists, constructions are being made by deforestation and evacuation of residents from there.
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, big resorts and parks are constructed by cutting trees and shifting
people
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 who are belonging to that targeted
area
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. These are
the
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some of the main impacts of
tourism
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 on
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environment
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the environment
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.
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, these
threatens
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 can be overcome by the proper execution of the following preventive measures.
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First
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 one is
implementation
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the implementation
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 of adequate systems for wastes disposal. By collecting and recycling
of
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wastes can reduce
the
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environmental pollution. An example
for
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 is placing dustbins for collecting plastics and should
recycled
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it
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them
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 in a proper way.
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, it is better to include that particular habitat
to
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in
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 the part of the
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tourism
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 rather than clearing them from there. These will increase the beauty of that
area
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 as well
income
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the income
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 of the local
people
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.
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 can be said by constructing
eco friendly
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 parks and
instead
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 of resorts and hotels local
people
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 can arrange
home stay
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homestay
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 as well as homely foods.
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innovative
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 will reduce the environmental impacts through
tourism
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. In conclusion,
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environment
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the environment
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 is suffering a lot of concerns as the arrival of
tourism
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 in many ways whereas these can
be prevent
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be prevented
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 by taking necessary actions for controlling of pollutions and including its habitat as a part of
tourism
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