Your English-speaking friend has asked for your help with a college project helshe is doing about celebrating New Year in different countries. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ◦ say how important New Year is to people in your country ◦ describe how New Year is celebrated in your country ◦ explain what you like about New Year celebrations in your country

Dear Ayo, I hope you are well. I was so excited to hear from you after the
last
time we spoke; I miss you so much. I received your letter about writing a project on how New
Year
is celebrated in Nigeria, and I would be happy to provide you with the necessary details. New
Year
is a very important ritual in my country, and everyone from all three different religions takes part in it as a form of cleansing and asking God for a favourable and prosperous
year
.
Firstly
, people proceed to their various religious gatherings from the 31st of December involve spending the eve of the New
Year
praising God and seeking forgiveness,
as well as
favour for the new
year
.
Furthermore
, at exactly 12 AM on the 1st of January, people start rejoicing and blowing balloons into the atmosphere.
In addition
, one thing I cherish about
this
festival is the way it unites family and friends.
Moreover
, people
travel
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who travel
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from
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far and wide come to celebrate in Nigeria with their extended family. The bond it creates is simply amazing. I hope
this
information will assist you in completing your project. If,
however
, you have more questions or concerns, please feel free to reach out to me. I wish you all the best. Warm regards, Burm.
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task achievement
Your response was well-structured and effectively addressed all parts of the prompt. Just ensure each paragraph is developed around a single main point for maximum clarity.
coherence cohesion
Consider adding more transitional phrases for even smoother paragraph connections, although your information logically flowed well.
task achievement
You maintained a warm and friendly tone throughout the letter, which is suitable given the context.
coherence cohesion
The letter begins with a clear greeting and ends with a kind closing, which enhances the coherence and warmth of the communication.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Reflection
  • Goal setting
  • Traditions
  • Customs
  • Public celebrations
  • Fireworks displays
  • Unique local traditions
  • Communal
  • Familial
  • Prosperity
  • Festive atmosphere
  • Resolution
  • Good wishes
  • Exchanging gifts
  • Cultural and social differences
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