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We are producing more and more rubbish nowadays. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help and reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

#rubbish #governments #amount
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Production of wastage at a high level is a ubiquitous problem nowadays. I will discuss both the postulates reasons as well as solutions along with my rationale associated with appropriate exemplification in the subsequent paragraph. At the outset, increasing numbers of
factories
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 are the primary reason for enhancing the
garbage
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 or waste material. Many
factories
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 open their drainage pine direct into the
river
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,
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 the whole waste material including chemicals pours directly into the
river
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 which pollutes the
river
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 as well as the environment. For the solution, municipalities should often visit
factories
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 for inspection that they are following or not the rule and how much pollution they are producing.They
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 charge penalties along with punishment for breaking the law.
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, a survey conducted by Lucknow municipality stated that they had baned 9
factories
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 in 2015 for increasing pollution and drainage their
garbage
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 into the
river
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.
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, the numbers of uses of
plastic
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bags
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 are directly proportional to the enhancement of the rubbish. People often prefer to carry things in
plastic
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bags
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 which is non-degradable. To stop
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 excessive use of
plastic
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bags
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 government should ban
plastic
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bags
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 and people should
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 carry fabric
bags
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 with them when they go shopping things. To illustrate, a report published by the Maharashtra government stated that after strict implementation of poly
bags
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 law they reduced the production of
garbage
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 by 79% in 2018. To conclude, after perusal of aforementioned points it is conspicuous that increasing
garbage
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 material is detrimental for the environment as well as for our health. The Government should strictly implement the appropriate rules and
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 penalise those who break the law.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • disposable culture
  • over-packaging
  • non-recyclable
  • public awareness
  • waste management
  • environmental impact
  • recycle
  • recycling facilities
  • waste separation
  • single-use products
  • infrastructure
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