Violence in society increases when more violence is shown on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Action movies and
TV
series that contain violent images can give viewers a sense of excitement. They are increasingly popular nowadays. Use synonyms
However
, despite watching these kinds of Linking Words
television
programs is entertaining, more Use synonyms
violence
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television
may breed more Use synonyms
violence
in society.
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Firstly
, Linking Words
TV
programs that contain violent images are like to mislead Use synonyms
children
without fully developed minds. Use synonyms
TV
is the most important source of entertainment and to gain knowledge for Use synonyms
children
normally. Use synonyms
Children
who lack the ability to judge right and wrong will absorb both positive and negative audio-visual information displayed on the screen. Use synonyms
As a result
, they may practice what they learned in reality for fun. Linking Words
However
, their causal activities may cause damage to other Linking Words
people
. The violent images may Use synonyms
further
affect Linking Words
children
deeply when they grow up, especially when parents ignore and do not regulate their Use synonyms
children
’s behaviour.
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On the other hand
, Linking Words
violence
shown on Use synonyms
television
may encourage more Use synonyms
people
to commit crimes. Use synonyms
For example
, in the workplace as well as at school, Linking Words
people
driven by self-interest might make the use of methods containing Use synonyms
violence
in movies or Use synonyms
TV
series to deter others and make a profit for themselves. These activities will disrupt social order. Use synonyms
Moreover
, because talents may be fear showing their talent, society development will be stagnant. Linking Words
Although
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people
could use legislation to protect themselves, there are still many Use synonyms
people
who lack law knowledge bullied for a long time.
In conclusion, not only for Use synonyms
children
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also
for adults, more Linking Words
violence
shown on screen may lead to a negative effect on Use synonyms
people
’s minds and guide them to commit crimes without consideration. Use synonyms
Therefore
, I suggest that governments should regulate Linking Words
violence
displayed on Use synonyms
television
and create a healthy atmosphere in societyUse synonyms
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