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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think this? What is your opinion of crime fiction and crime dramas?

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Nowadays, several countries report that
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novels and television
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 on criminal activities are gaining popularity among the viewers. There are some possible reasons for
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,
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, one of the most important
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 is the increase in the
crime
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 rate across the globe. In my opinion,
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 fiction books and dramas
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 youngsters, especially girls, in self-readiness to tackle attacks when faced in
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 world. To start with, it has been noted in
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 few years that both developed or
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under developed
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 nations are reporting countless cases
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 savagery. Due to
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, the frightened people try to engross themselves in reading about the types of violent acts that
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 happened in
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history or may arise in future.
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, they watch
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 programmes often to understand the causes of
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rise
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 in
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crime
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the crime
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 rate.
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, 7 out of 10 viewers at Crosswords, Singapore said in the
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 survey that due to the sudden spike in the murder cases in our locality, they watched the
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 "A Murder Hub in SG" more than two times to understand its root cause, which is a clear proof that people have a significant interest in
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 movies or
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.
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, I believe that TV shows
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 the harsh reality of today's world and helps the growing females to tackle difficult situations.
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, while watching
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 on rapes or kidnappings, women tend to imagine themselves in the same situation and start thinking about the ways to handle
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 instances.
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, the knowledge they acquire from these shows,
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tend to apply when stuck in a similar scenario.
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, a girl in Turkey who was attacked by a maniac for an attempt to rape
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 said that she saved her life by using
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pepper spray which she had seen in a movie.
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 is
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evidence of the importance of
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 shows in women's life. In conclusion, an exponential rise in the
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 rate and people's curiosity to know about
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 activities can be given a credit for the rise in demand
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crime
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 dramas.
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, I believe that
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 indeed helps young girls to become self-reliant to fight against when attacked.
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