Some people claim than not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
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task response
Your introduction clearly states your opinion. However, it can be made stronger by briefly outlining the main points that will be discussed in the essay.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure each paragraph has a clear topic sentence and that the ideas flow smoothly. Transitions between paragraphs are generally good but can be improved for better coherence.
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Your points are clear and generally well-developed. Including more specific examples and evidence will strengthen your arguments.
coherence and cohesion
Try to provide more linkage words and cohesive devices to make the connections between your ideas more explicit, which will improve overall readability.
coherence and cohesion
Your essay has a solid structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
task response
You have provided a complete response to the task with relevant points about both the necessity of laws and alternative solutions.
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Your ideas are clear and presented in a logical order.
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.
Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.
When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.
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- for example
- for instance
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- take, for example