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Although more and more people read newspapers on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?

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Generally, communities consider journals as their source of
information
 about the surroundings and current affairs,in spite of having online
newspapers
. Agri to the fact that paper-based
information
 is more reliable and easily accessible for more crowd most of the time. When we say about the press we can immediately think about the bunch of papers with
information
 return on it, it is accessible easily in many areas and it's cheap when we are talking about the cost-effectiveness of
newspapers
 are considered the cheapest form of the word that we can gather from anywhere nowadays. It has so many options from regional daily to national
newspapers
 to choose from. Old people are more familiar with the daily sweaters easier for them together knowledge with that medium.
On the other hand
 if talk about the internet best magazine,
first
 we need to think about the accessibility of the internet and the availability of smartphones and devices. When calling out for smartphones in devices we can clearly see the price gap between online periodical and paper base
newspapers
. In the current ,era one considered technology and the internet the most important form of
information
 and still remains the costliest option for many families,Still in many areas of India
for example
 they don't have access to the basic right called electricity. If we don't have enough knowledge about expressing devices and technology we won't able to open a certain app and be able to read out the magazine. All in all in the modern era me sound of to be the easiest and convenient form of
information
 called online
newspapers
 still paper
this
 tabloid remains the
first
-ever choice for gathering instruction for the most population.
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