Some parents but their children whatever they ask for , and allow their children to do whatever they want . Is this a good way to raise children ? What consequences could this type of parenting have for children as they grow older ?

Growing with
this
era of modernization , many
changes
took place in our surroundings
such
as variations in behaviour , physical
changes
, atmospheric
changes
and so on .
Changes
in behaviour can be related to anger issues and uninvolved parenting habits . Negligence includes fulfilling each and every unnecessary wish of their young
ones
in order to make them happy or even
this
can be defined as bribing their own pupils . To commence with , the role of
parents
since earlier times is meant to be strict , mature and have a stronghold on their young
ones
. In earlier times a father was always the head of the family and all the vital decisions were to be approved by him and had a boundary line with their
children
. ,
Also
the
children
respected their fathers to the fullest that they never had the courage even to argue with him , they were even quiet only by one stare of their father . Mother's
on the other hand
were calm and sensible and we're mostly housewife's but ,
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their
children
respected their mothers and
also
helped her in each and every household work and in many other ways the could lower her burden . The
children
who grew up with strict
parents
tend to have
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rather than
children
who had neglectful
parents
or were left all by themselves in their childhood .
Besides
joint families can play a crucial role to raise a responsible juvenile as there are so many elderly and experienced people to guide or look after ,
children
are
also
keenly closer to their family members as they get a lot of attention , love and affection from the warmer hands
that is
grandparents . Recently , the parenting methods had changed a lot , neither there is any sense of respect towards
parents
nor much love and Affection is found .
Children
in lieu of politely requesting things they won't tend to be stubborn and are recklessly arguing with their
parents
. In
this
case, only the
children
cannot be blamed as
this
is all a fruitless result of negligence .
Children
should be provided with limited stuff only, rather than giving them everything they ask for . Each and every wish should not be fulfilled as they should learn the sense of adjusting with less and will become comparatively mature and responsible. Fulfilling each and every wish of their young
ones
is a bad
way
to raise them as
this
way
children
would become stubborn and later on will create annoying and shameful situations that won't be easy to bear as a parent .
Hence
, the best
way
to raise young
ones
is to become friends with them and si by setting a boundary line for both
parents
and
children
in order to maintain a sense of respect and love . In
this
,
way
they will learn various worldly values
such
as adjusting and
also
being satisfied with what they have . They will not only be mature and responsible but
also
respect their
parents
and other elders .
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