International travel has many advantages to both travellers and the country that they visited. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

With the remarkable development of the global transport industry, international

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has become popular as people can

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anywhere around the world. It is believed that

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has brought numerous boons to the local economy while some locals concede that the disadvantages of

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outweigh its benefits. In my opinion, I am in strong agreement with the former notion as

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play a pivotal role in the development of many nations. I shall put forth some ideas to demonstrate my points in the following paragraph.

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is considered as

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leverage that boosts the local economy of many developed and developing countries. It is true that the number of

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has a strong influence on the prosperity of various local businesses

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as restaurants, hotels and bars. The more visitors

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to an area, the more businesses are established.

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,

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helps enhance the employment rate of an area as many locals are hired by these restaurants, hotels or bars.

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, Bali is considered

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one of the well-known destinations in Indonesia that welcomes millions of

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yearly.

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, a plethora of luxurious resorts

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been constructed that offer

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to the indigenous people.

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, thanks to curious

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, many traditional handmade industries have been recovered and become more popular around the world.

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, many cultural exchange activities will be taken place between

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and local inhabitants.

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, there are

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negative points that

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may bring to the local areas. The natural environment may be polluted or destroyed due to the uncontrolled exploitation of local authorities and irresponsible

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. Administrations may have to deal with a large amount of waste from

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that may affect local habitat. Without adequate measurements and preventions, these stunning and natural destinations may

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permanently.

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, the increase

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crime may be another concern. More

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may lead to the rise of various types of criminals

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as

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, abduction or prostitution. A typical example is Ho Chi Minh

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in Vietnam where the number of reported

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has increased dramatically due to the growth of

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in recent years. In conclusion, it is undeniable that

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has contributed to the amendment of the global economy and helped to boost the profit of many companies.

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, governments need to implement strict rules

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both locals and

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in order to protect the natural environment.