Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society. Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion.One

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One part of the

comunity

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community

agrees that the penalty of

death

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is acceptable for those who have indulged in serious crimes, while the other part of the society thinks

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injustice

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an injustice

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to punish with a harsh penalty in the modern environment we live in. Personally, in my point of

view

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I would

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argue

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ague

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that the criminals

deserves

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punishment according to their deeds.

In the

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world we exist in, is cruel and makes it hard for innocent people to live a peaceful life. It is human

tendancy

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tendency

to commit

into

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apply

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wrongdoings

however

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, criminal

offenses

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offences

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such

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as murder, rape etc should be punished as a reference for those who are planning to do the same crime, as well as, a lesson for the criminals. By punishing them by law we are giving justice to the victims

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, it is necessary to have

death

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penalities

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penalties

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who have

commited

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committed

serious and violent deeds.

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, the victims are physically and mentally tormented

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, they would have to go through a tough stage and have a negative impact on their lives

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, to compensate

the

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damage done by the

offenser

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offence

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the government should be harsh even if people fail to see

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side of the story without considering the future of the adults.

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, if the incident proceeds to be unnoticed it is unlikely, for the crime rate to drastically increase as they would not be

severly

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severely

punished.

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, some teenagers

conciously

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consciously

take bad decisions knowing the fact that they would be destroying another person's life because

the

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they

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mislead people are brave enough to beat the court with their political powers and are convinced they will face

less

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charges. In my opinion,

death

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penalities should be

noralized

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normalized

normalised

as it is not being

incosiderate

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inconsiderate

to a human being's life but simply giving the taste of their own medicines in a lawful way.

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, to

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summarize everything

stated so far, according to me it is not a capital punishment to advocate

death

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sentences for

unforgiveable

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unforgivable

incidents by them but rather serving

juistice

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justice

which is important in present ties.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Advocates
Capital punishment
Contemporary society
Violent crimes
Deterrence
Retribution
Cost-effectiveness
Imprisonment
Innocent
Unethical
Inhumane
Misuse
Legal systems
Heinous crimes
Closure
Moral concerns

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