Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society. Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion.One

One part of the
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community
agrees that the penalty of
death
is acceptable for those who have indulged in serious crimes, while the other part of the society thinks
this
is
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to punish with a harsh penalty in the modern environment we live in. Personally, in my point of
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that the criminals
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punishment according to their deeds.
In the
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world we exist in, is cruel and makes it hard for innocent people to live a peaceful life. It is human
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tendency
to commit
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wrongdoings
however
, criminal
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such
as murder, rape etc should be punished as a reference for those who are planning to do the same crime, as well as, a lesson for the criminals. By punishing them by law we are giving justice to the victims
therefore
, it is necessary to have
death
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who have
commited
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committed
serious and violent deeds.
Firstly
, the victims are physically and mentally tormented
moreover
, they would have to go through a tough stage and have a negative impact on their lives
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damage done by the
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offence
offender
the government should be harsh even if people fail to see
this
side of the story without considering the future of the adults.
Secondly
, if the incident proceeds to be unnoticed it is unlikely, for the crime rate to drastically increase as they would not be
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severely
punished.
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, some teenagers
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consciously
take bad decisions knowing the fact that they would be destroying another person's life because
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mislead people are brave enough to beat the court with their political powers and are convinced they will face
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charges. In my opinion,
death
penalities should be
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normalized
normalised
as it is not being
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inconsiderate
to a human being's life but simply giving the taste of their own medicines in a lawful way.
Finally
, to
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summarize everything
stated so far, according to me it is not a capital punishment to advocate
death
sentences for
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unforgivable
incidents by them but rather serving
juistice
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justice
which is important in present ties.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Advocates
  • Capital punishment
  • Contemporary society
  • Violent crimes
  • Deterrence
  • Retribution
  • Cost-effectiveness
  • Imprisonment
  • Innocent
  • Unethical
  • Inhumane
  • Misuse
  • Legal systems
  • Heinous crimes
  • Closure
  • Moral concerns
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