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Some people think that governments should increase the tax on unhealthy food to enhance public health. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #governments #tax #food #health
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Many recent pieces of research have shown that unhealthy
food
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, including fast
food
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 and processed
food
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, is not suitable for health and may cause Obesity. Obesity is considered the mother of many diseases
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 as diabetes and high blood pressure.
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, some
people
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 argue that the Government should impose a levy to reduce the purchase of unhealthy
food
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. In my opinion, it is not a feasible approach, and I can't agree with implementing and increasing the
food
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 tax because it conceives an extra burden on
people
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's pockets and is challenging for the ruling
party
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 to sustain their popularity. Post covid the world economy is declining and keep on declining;
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,
people
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 are working hard to breast up and cope with their living expenses by working hard and may doing two jobs. In
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 an exhausting situation, giving the extra burden in implementing a levy on
food
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, which is a basic need of life, is inappropriate. When a person is working hard and at the end of the day hard to buy
food
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 with extra taxes are unjustified and kind of curbing the fundamental right of living.
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, implementing extra taxes on
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 is a policy that directly impacts the population's quality of living and will eventually reduce the ruling Government's political
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's popularity.
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, the following term election will negatively impact the ruling
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's vote bank and have higher chances of losing the election and sitting in the opposition rather than in the Government. In conclusion, I reckon that implementing an extra levy on
food
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 is not feasible to reduce unhealthy
food
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 consumption and improve population health. Indeed, It negatively impacts the
people
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's quality of life and popularity of a nation;'s ruling
party
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.
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