Government must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In current decades, most states spend a large part of the

budget

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not only on public

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but

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on the

arts

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. While I agree that it is necessary to distribute a proportion of

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money

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toward art, I

also

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believe that most should be spent on public

services

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. On the one hand, the

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should spend the

budget

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on

arts

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as a way to improve

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quality

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the quality

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of life.

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to say that people get great pleasure in going to see music and theatre performance, especially people who work under a pressure environment.

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,

arts

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have the value to conserve culture for future generations . Every nation has

their

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its

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own traditional kinds of music and literature that include national culture, geography and history.

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, many younger people choose to watch the movie “war and peace” that reappears

Russia

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in Russia

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in the

last

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century. They said that going to see in theatre makes the movie to be more attractive than watching at home and they learn more about Russian history, know geographic factor as well as Russian culture.

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, investing

money

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in public

services

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like hospitals, schools and roads plays a crucial role because they directly determine the

quality

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of life. Taking Vietnam as an example,

government

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reduce

money

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on hospitals and schools, resulting in poor hospital facilities, fewer teachers and a long waiting list for these places. These detrimentally affects

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apply

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the

quality

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of service.

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, a large proportion of the

government

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budget

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must be spent on public service because

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is the only way to maintain the standards and accessibility for everyone. In conclusion, spending a part of the

budget

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on the

arts

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is not a waste of

money

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because of its’ benefits.

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, the majority of investment should channel into public

services

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. A balance of

government

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spending is the most important factor to maintain the

quality

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of life