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In some cultures, children are encouraged to compete against each other. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this approach

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Please find the notes from the SOS meeting held on 13th July 2021 Attendees: Prasoon, Sreekanth, Sourya, Sindhu, Shreya, Suman, Nico, Siva, Tejaswi, Gunjan, Suma Below are the minutes of the meeting: - Discussed on, •scheduling a focus group discussion on understanding split.io functionalities. Gunjan will set up a meeting • cadence of SoS meeting and possibility to move towards POD based SoS. • exploring possibility on introduction of shared folder or creation of sub-channels so that raising concerns become seamless • standardizing the cut-off time for coder merge in release management • effective management of dependency board
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