Some people believe that a college or university education should be available to all students. Others believe that higher education should be available only to good students. Discuss these views. Which view do you agree with? Explain why.
People
learn through their entire lives. They constantly improve their knowledge and develop. I think that a college or university education
should be available to all students because every person has the right to choose the way to selfperfection
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self-perfection
self perfection
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I will give some of my reasons to support my position. First of all, every person should have the Correct your spelling
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chance
to get a higher degree, gain
new knowledge and experience. Correct word choice
and gain
However
, some people
believe that higher education
should be available only to good students. I think it is silly. It is like to make
unavailable traveling for one who does not have Change the verb form
making
IQ
high enough. Second of all, some young Correct article usage
an IQ
people
do not do well at school but they have great personality and ability to learn. They are self-confident, persistent and patient. With these qualities they can get higher grades then
their classmates who are talented but lazy. Imagine Replace the word
than
for example
situation when a teenager gets high grades because his or her parents constantly make him or her study and help to do most of the homework. In this
case
a child does very well at school but I think a college can show the opposite results. Add a comma
case,
Finally
, it is a
discrimination against students to make available higher Correct article usage
apply
education
only for good ones. So, if a student does poor
and gets low grades he/she should be sent down. But if a person was never given a Change the word
poorly
chance
to try himself/herself at college, what to do in this
case? To sum up
, I think that all young people
should have the chance
to get a higher education
. To take or not this
chance
must be up to them.Submitted by alexia.13 on
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