Some people believe that a college or university education should be available to all students. Others believe that higher education should be available only to good students. Discuss these views. Which view do you agree with? Explain why.
People
learn through their entire lives. They constantly improve their knowledge and develop. I think that a college or university Use synonyms
education
should be available to all students because every person has the right to choose the way to Use synonyms
selfperfection
. Correct your spelling
self-perfection
self perfection
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I will give some of my reasons to support my position. First of all, every person should have the Correct your spelling
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chance
to get a higher degree, Use synonyms
gain
new knowledge and experience. Correct word choice
and gain
However
, some Linking Words
people
believe that higher Use synonyms
education
should be available only to good students. I think it is silly. It is like Use synonyms
to make
unavailable traveling for one who does not have Change the verb form
making
IQ
high enough. Second of all, some young Correct article usage
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people
do not do well at school but they have great personality and ability to learn. They are self-confident, persistent and patient. With these qualities they can get higher grades Use synonyms
Linking Words
then
their classmates who are talented but lazy. Imagine Replace the word
than
for example
situation when a teenager gets high grades because his or her parents constantly make him or her study and help to do most of the homework. In Linking Words
this
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case
a child does very well at school but I think a college can show the opposite results. Add a comma
case,
Finally
, it is Linking Words
a
discrimination against students to make available higher Correct article usage
apply
education
only for good ones. So, if a student does Use synonyms
poor
and gets low grades he/she should be sent down. But if a person was never given a Change the word
poorly
chance
to try himself/herself at college, what to do in Use synonyms
this
case? Linking Words
To sum up
, I think that all young Linking Words
people
should have the Use synonyms
chance
to get a higher Use synonyms
education
. To take or not Use synonyms
this
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chance
must be up to them.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite