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global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013.

#sales #five #phone #brands
The chart gives some data about being bought
of
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 the kinds of 5 mobile phone from 2009 to 2013. Overall, the majority of selling could be occurred by
Samsung
 and
Nokia
,
on the
contrary
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 the least of the show was happened by ZTE.
Finally
, the others were relatively similar to one another. With regards to
Samsung
 and
Nokia
. The pointer of
Samsung
 in 2013 was closer to the index of
Nokia
 in 2009 (450 and just under 450 respectively) and the top show was 450. What is more, the statistic of
Samsung
 in 2009 was relatively similar to( ) the show of the
Nokia
 in 2013, but the least number sales realized by
Samsung
 was approximately just above 200. In terms of the others (Apple, LG, ZTE). Especially in, the
amount
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 of sales in ZTE was the closest and the maximum number was appreciated just over 50 in 2013,
in
contrast
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 the minimum number was shown in 2009 with 50. The top of the statistic was illustrated in 2013 with 150 in Apple,
on the
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 the minority of sales occurred in 2009 with almost just over 10 in Apple.
Lastly
, between the pointers of LG
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the top amount belonged to 2009 with just above 100, on the one
hand
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 the minimum was illustrated in 2013 with just under 100.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Global sales
  • Mobile phone brands
  • Market share
  • Trends
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Technological advancements
  • Innovation
  • Consumer preferences
  • Demographics
  • Market dominance
  • Brand loyalty
  • Comparative analysis
  • Sales figures
  • Data interpretation
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