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Some people think children should learn to paint and draw at school. Others believe it is just a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Many people think that young people should get a piece of knowledge about paint and drawing other people believe that it is only
waste
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 their time.So we will present our own opinion on
this
 issue. Today we are seeing many teenage children should learn about
art
 because they cause to improve their creating
also
 concentrate on their program
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, for example,
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for example
 drawing and
art
 no only increase creative but they can learn mathematic
such
 as measurement object and angle shining or management of stress and mental problems and so on , So
art
 can help them. Now a day, Many children and parents
aren'
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don't love
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t
 love
art
 and they discuss that drawing and painting aren'
t
 needed for today their society and they just spend their time so they aren'
t
 beneficial for their children's future because today's technology needs more engineers than
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the artist
an artist
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artist
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artists
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.
Finally
, every child should pay attention to their interests
also
 future job opportunities and if they force on them about activities, it won'
t
 be successful their lives.
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