In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The online
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media is becoming increasingly popular. In
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recent year,
the
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newspapers and
books
have been decreased
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buying. In the
next
decade,
people
will always read the information and news
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their technology devices without expanding. I completely agree with
this
opinion and think that a lot of
people
will turn to receive everything on an online platform.
First
of all,
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the online websites that
available
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everyone
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to access have many
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and categories. In the other words, our world has various
people
who do not prefer
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the same notion. The Online websites give them several
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of
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that they can find which one is the most
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topic and click to read the content in
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.
For instance
, I enjoyed Biology and sports.
then
, I usually search these topics on
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website and find lots of content that I want to read. It is free for all and you do not have to pay anything extra.
That is
why
people
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data from online channels.
Secondly
, carrying
books
or newspapers are not convenient.
This
problem will disappear
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if you use technology gadgets
such
as mobile phones and
tablet
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for searching those e-
books
.
For example
, my friend prefers to read a novel. Despite The book is very gigantic and difficult to bring for go to anywhere. So, I do not like to read the novel from the book and I turn to a novel website for reading e-book because electronic
books
are more comfortable to keep than
books
. To conclude, I strongly believe that in our
next
future, reading news on papers or
books
will be extinct because online reading is more convenient than paper-based
also
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for finding.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Technological advancements
  • Digital content
  • Environmental concerns
  • Tactile experience
  • Production costs
  • Distribution costs
  • Digital divide
  • Digital fatigue
  • Print media
  • Credibility
  • Permanence
  • Collectibility
  • Aesthetic value
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