Some people think that museums and art galleries should concentrate on the works of their own countries instead of the works of art from other parts of the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that galleries and

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should not emphasize

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multi-cultural artwork. I partially agree with

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statement and the reason

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my partial disagreement is discussed in the following paragraphs. the reason why the domestic

artifacts

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and artwork should be emphasized by the

museums

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and artistic places

to

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avoid

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diversity

which may

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to imperfection. It means by focusing on the international

arts

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and sculptures, the artists and the

museum

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management are unable to focus on any single speciality.

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,

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distribution of focus on multiple

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of work belonging to different

nation

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leads to the lack of perfection.

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, the reputation of a

museum

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or an

art

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gallery may be compromised.

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, the probability of

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loosing

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the originality rises when

multi cultural

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arts

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are showcased by

museums

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and

art

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gallaries

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galleries

. In

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cases, the existence of

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museums

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and galleries become uncertain.

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, a

museum

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opened in Rome to solely reflect the historical

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of

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empire was later mixed with

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as well as french rulers.

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, that

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was forcefully closed for not retaining its originality.

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, some individuals support the variety and encourage to welcome

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international

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artworks

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art works

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in

museums

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and

art

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galleries.

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believe

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that

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such

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showcasing the diversity of work attracts people from various

culture

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and

region

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as they become excited to experience the international talents.

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,

such

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art

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gallries

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galleries

and

museums

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flourish with the increment of tourists and locals visiting the place.

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, Yellow stone

art

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gallary

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gallery

galary

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gallery

was unknown and small scale until it introduced modern

arts

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from all across the globe which resulted in a drastic evolution and it became one of the most famous

art

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gallery

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in the US. In conclusion,

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involving the

arts

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and works from multiple

culture

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may compromise the originality and existence of that place,

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, its benefits cannot be neglected