Some people think that museums and art galleries should concentrate on the works of their own countries instead of the works of art from other parts of the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that galleries and

museums

should not emphasize

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multi-cultural artwork. I partially agree with

this

statement and the reason

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my partial disagreement is discussed in the following paragraphs. the reason why the domestic

artifacts

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and artwork should be emphasized by the

museums

and artistic places

to

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avoid

divesity

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diversity

which may

leads

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to imperfection. It means by focusing on the international

arts

and sculptures, the artists and the

museum

management are unable to focus on any single speciality.

As a result

,

this

distribution of focus on multiple

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of work belonging to different

nation

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leads to the lack of perfection.

Hence

, the reputation of a

museum

or an

art

gallery may be compromised.

In addition

, the probability of

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loosing

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the originality rises when

multi cultural

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arts

are showcased by

museums

and

art

gallaries

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galleries

. In

such

cases, the existence of

such

museums

and galleries become uncertain.

For instance

, a

museum

opened in Rome to solely reflect the historical

arts

of

roman

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empire was later mixed with

persians

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as well as french rulers.

Subsequently

, that

museum

was forcefully closed for not retaining its originality.

On the other hand

, some individuals support the variety and encourage to welcome

the

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international

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art works

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in

museums

and

art

galleries.

This

believe

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that

such

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showcasing the diversity of work attracts people from various

culture

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and

region

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as they become excited to experience the international talents.

Consequently

,

such

art

gallries

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galleries

and

museums

flourish with the increment of tourists and locals visiting the place.

For instance

, Yellow stone

art

gallary

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gallery

galary

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gallery

was unknown and small scale until it introduced modern

arts

from all across the globe which resulted in a drastic evolution and it became one of the most famous

art

gallery

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in the US. In conclusion,

although

involving the

arts

and works from multiple

culture

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may compromise the originality and existence of that place,

however

, its benefits cannot be neglected