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The two pie charts below show changes in world population by region between 1910 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts below show changes in world population by region between 1910 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The Given two pie chart
represent
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 the development in
world
population
 by parts under a spam time of 100 years
Overall
, can see that the Asian
region
 and Europe
region
 saw a decrease
whereas
 the other parts of the
world
 are almost increasing. In 1910, the
asian
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Asian
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region
 hold the majority of
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the
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world
population
 at a figure of 60% but it saw a decrease in 2010
at
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the
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 percentage of 54%.
Whereas
 in number on
population
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,population
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asia
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Asia
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 is expanding rapidly.
On the other hand
, Europe
also
 saw a drop in the percentage from 1910 to 2010 at 25% and 14% respectively
as well as
 it is
also
 expanding in
rate
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the rate
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 of its
population
. In comparison to the other regions of the
world
 which are North
America
, Africa,
latin
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Latin
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America
 and
other's
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 stood at the range of 5%, 4%,3% and 3% in 1910
whereas
 by 2010 many regions grew up which are Africa and
latin
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America
 at 10% and 8%
respectionely
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respectively
 at the same time some
region
 have the same percentage as they have in 1910 are North
america
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America
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 and others.
Athrough
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Although
A through
 we can see the addition of one
region
 by 2010 which is
Middle
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 east and north
africa
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Africa
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 at 6% and the total
number of
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world
population
 from 1910-2010
is
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raised
to
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 much
at
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 1700 million to 6 Billion.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, whereas".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words world, population, region, america with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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