A company has asked your local council to open a factory in the area where you live. You and your neighbours feel that this is not a great idea. write a letter to the local council. In your letter, you should: • state what problems this might cause • explain how it will affect you and others • suggest what you want the council to do.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to discuss
about
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the
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industry’s project that you have been planning for the borough where
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. From my point of view, it should be better placed in another address that I would recommend to you. With regards to detrimental effects, our
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worries about the pollution issues that might be produced during building and later functioning,
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of green lands. The designated area for
this
project is indispensable for our city, owing to the ecological role that it represents.
First
of all, there has a vital river that
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all over the town and supplies water. On top of that, there is located a famous park where children and elderly groups appreciate doing leisure activities,
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sports and picnics.
Accordingly
, the loss of
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field will
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cause several consequences to our community. I would like to suggest another address where you and the company can make
this
design takes place. I am talking about an ancient and deactivated garment industry at 46 Campton Road. I deeply believe
that is
a convenient ground to you, because it will allow a properly business zone,
furthermore
will not induce any trouble with population. Please, let me know how you will solve
this
situation. Yours Faithfully, Anne Smith.
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