You live close to a restaurant and have recently been disturbed by the noise coming from the restaurant in the evenings. Write a letter to owner of the restaurant. In your letter. 1. explain why you find the noise disturbing 2. suggest a way to solve the problem, 3. explain what you will do If the problem is not solved.

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Dear Boss of the restaurant The reason why I am writing

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want to complain about your unwelcome noise which is making loud noise regularly every evening after 11 p.m I would like to start by pointing out the fact my home is located near the restaurant.I know your restaurant is well-known in our city and you have a lot of clients.Personally, I go to eat dinner from time to time because their food is yummy.

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the noise coming from loud music is very disturbing.I have work early morning every day,so it is really hard for me to sleep.

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situation is not only annoying me,it is

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annoying others near the cafe. Considering the situation,on behalf of the community we suggest you must not play music loudly at night.

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way useful for both of us.if the problem is not solved we take appropriate action and write a complaint letter to the government about

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situation. I hope you will look into the matter and give me an immediate reply.thank you for

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letter I look forward to receiving a prompt reply at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Nicolas Jackson.

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tone

Make sure to use a more formal greeting, such as 'Dear [Owner's Name]' or 'Dear Sir/Madam' instead of 'Dear Boss of the restaurant'.

coherence

Your paragraphs could be structured more clearly. For instance, separate the reason for the noise disturbance and the proposed solution into distinct paragraphs.

tone

In the final paragraph, ensure your closing statement expresses anticipation for their action. Phrasing like 'I hope to hear from you soon' would be appropriate.

task achievement

You communicated your reason for writing clearly and outlined the problem well.

task achievement

Your suggestion for solving the problem is considerate and reflects the community's perspective.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

198 words

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