Some say you should always marry for love; others say that in an uncertain world it is wiser to marry for money. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience

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Nowadays,
money
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is one of the most significant materials in our
lives
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. To many people, it is appropriate to marry for
money
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rather than
love
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.
However
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, I believe that
both
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love
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and
money
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should be
bouncetogether
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bounce together
bound together
in any
marriages
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marriage
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. Certainly,
money
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is an important part
in
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of
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our
lives
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[TS]. It is hard for any
persons
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person
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to accept a partner which* does not have
money
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or at least a job to take care of future family.
Hence
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, said “marry for
money
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also
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has its right
in
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to
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some extent.
However
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,
love
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should be the root of any
marriages
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marriage
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[TS].
Firstly
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, it is because
love
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is
such
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a glue to connect two persons
which
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who
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have their own
lives
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, become one (NC). So, they can share each other’s
the
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apply
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sadness, happiness to overcome any difficulties in daily
lives
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.
Moreover
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,
love
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makes people growing up because they do not only have
responsibility
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a responsibility
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to themselves, but
also
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to their partners as well.
That is
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why marrying with
love
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is always encouraged. In my opinion, I think that
both
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love
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and
money
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is
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both
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apply
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necessary [TS].
Marriage
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relying on
money
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would be rapidly disintegrated when unfortunately the
money
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is run out.
In
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contrary
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the contrary
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*,
marriage
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relying on
love
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would sometimes come to end when they could not earn
money
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to carry out family (NC),
such
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as paying bills, buying food, etc.
Therefore
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,
love
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and
money
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should stand together in
marriage
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even though their contribution could be unbalanced (NC). As we have seen,
marriage
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without either
money
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or
love
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would come to an unhappy ending. So I believe that they
both
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have their own contribution to a merry family.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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