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people think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicle to solve environmental problems. give your opinion.

#people #government #cost #fuel #cars #vehicle
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The use of
fuel
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 gradually has the worst
impact
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 on environmental issues. Some people believe that increasing the price of
fuel
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 for vehicles can decrease the
impact
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 on the natural surroundings in the future. Even though there are people who are declined, in
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 paper, I will partially agree with
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 solution. Increasing the price of oil for vehicles can cause harm
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 society. Especially the
impact
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 on the economy.
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, the cost of commodities and transportation will be as costly as the cost of
fuel
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. The public would have difficulty fulfilling their basic needs and maybe increase the percentage of poverty in the country.
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,
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 phenomenon might be impactful for the middle down society
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 of the wealthy community.
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, with regards to the price of oil increasing, users of
thefuel
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the fuel
energy
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 will decrease.
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, scientists will
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 invent alternative
energy
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 to replace
theoil
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the oil
.
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, biogas
energy
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which
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is made from organic waste and
a
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fuel
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 made from plants or vegetable materials. Those fuels are environmentally friendly and can be accepted by society.
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, inventors will be finding
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energy efficient
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 vehicles in the future. And Tesla is a good example of
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, namely Elon Musk designing an electric car charged
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energy
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 from electricity or a solar panel. In conclusion, I believe
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 decision will be better for the environment as well as human beings and I wholeheartedly support
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 argument, even though some people will feel the enormous
impact
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 in the
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 phase. Better solutions are invented to replace the use of oil.
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