Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The higher remuneration of the

sportsmen

has always been a popular topic for debate as some believe that

people

across other fields

also

contribute the same effort but end up being paid less while the rest believe it’s worth their talent. I would have to

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my support to the former group as I feel that there are other areas where

people

put in the same or more effort and

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hard work

that is

mostly overshadowed by the sports industry. It is widely agreed that being a successful sportsperson would require a lot of character,

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hard work

and physical fitness that needs to be maintained throughout the career. Until their retirement they

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have the freedom to yield to their tastebuds, party like an animal or give their bones some rest. It can’t be denied that apart from their own achievements they

also

play for their country’s pride. The football players are an apt example for

such

a scenario where they go through a tough diet and discipline to play for their representative clubs as well as for their country and

hence

are paid a hefty salary.

Furthermore

, the earning period of an athlete would not

last

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as they retire very early during their career. Despite all these factors

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it’s not fair to pay

sportsmen

more than the

people

putting in more or less the same efforts in the other sectors. There are many

such

fields where the contributors deserve to be paid more than the

sportsmen

, like soldiers dedicating their lives guarding the country’s borders, scientists working hard to explore things to improve human life, etc. A very good instance of

such

a scenario would be the doctors and the frontline workers who risked their lives during the pandemic trying to save the infected patients. Still, they were not paid a higher salary as compared to the

sportsmen

.

Hence

I conclude that

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even though

there is an explicit effort and dedication put forth by the sportsperson, they should not be paid more than the

people

who commit their life and

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hard work

towards their own domain.