Currently children have less responsibilities than they had in the past some say this is a good change some argue that it had negative effect on children. Discuss both views and give your opinion based on your personal experience.

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there are fewer responsibilities that concern juveniles.
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can have some negative effects on kids, it seems that it can be positively influential for the
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and society. The easy
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of modern times had made
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be expected with fewer responsibilities. Because of the new technology and ,urbanism
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routine
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are less demanding to be done by human hands.
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in the past people needed to provide water from different parts of the city like a river or a well.
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was a tiring task that was mostly given to younger members of the family but nowadays these sort of
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are being provided by the cities infrastructures and had taken the burden of the
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from the
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.
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, these
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were mostly boring and tiring and sometimes dangerous it helped the
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to have a sense of duty and it could be vital for their future and to gain a sense of
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independency
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.
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the
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and different roles had made the
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be more self-liable and independent
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skill can be learned from other activities as well. Whit the burden of the routine
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being omitted from the
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mind they can be more creative and learn new
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skills aside from the ones that they could learn through the
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they used to have. There are so many
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skills that my younger sister with different games and
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that she had in school that was not necessary her
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but a part of a game and her choice and you could see that with more time that she had because of the fewer
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that she had to do she would be able to try different and innovative methods and be more creative with the
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that she was given. In conclusion, it seems that
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the responsibilities had some beneficial aspects for the
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, these aspects can be learned with other methods and the fact that
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have less
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can help them to be more creative and help them gain more skills.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Responsibilities
  • Extracurricular activities
  • Well-rounded development
  • Hobbies
  • Stress
  • Pressure
  • Creative
  • Curious
  • Life skills
  • Problem-solving
  • Time management
  • Independence
  • Entitlement
  • Dependency
  • Challenges
  • Discipline
  • Balanced development
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