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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is often argued that sharing the
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 as much as possible in many types of
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 as scientific, business and education
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 is a good way, while some
people
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 claim that it is too necessary to share the
information
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 freely.
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 essay will argue these points of view. On the one hand,
information
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 is a thing that
people
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 use in order to study in their works or their
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. If
people
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 can
access
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 the
information
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 freely, they will be able to know the
information
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 which is updated all the time. In certain
research
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, the
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 obtained can be applied to the
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 which is being studied.
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, market researchers have to
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 a large amount of business
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 before they can create a new strategy.
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, many scientists doing new
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 have to
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 the
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 which is related in order to publish a better or an updated one.
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, sharing
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 for free is not fair for some
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.
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 is because doing
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 or discovering a new thing are works for researchers. They publish the
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 in order to earn money.
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, before doing some
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 from researchers, some of them have to pay money to
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 the
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 which is related.
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 can lead to difficult data acquisition
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 for some
people
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 do not pay money once, but they have to pay more than one time to finish their work. It is clear that sharing
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 is too valuable to be shared freely. In conclusion, both these points of view are important for individuals. In my opinion, I believe that both of these perspectives are important to many
people
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 gaining specific details.
People
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 are supposed to
access
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 freely due to the use of
information
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 in their work.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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