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Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#visitors #attractions
I would agree to the far extent with the statement that tourists from overseas should outlay more money than green card
holder
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 of a
country
.
This
 essay will explain the reasons behind my view.
Firstly
,
tourisim
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tourism
 is the backbone of economical development for many countries. That being said, foreigners visiting old
mounuments
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monuments
aswell
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as well
 as historical
places
 should contribute more expense than the citizens. 
Places
such
 as Bali and Thailand are the heart of
touristic
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destination
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destinations
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 for many
travelers
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.
In other words
, many
non resident
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 people travel to these
places
 for recreational
purpose
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purposes
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. That being said, residents of a
country
 already contribute to reconstruct and conserve touristic attraction through
tax
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 system,
Therefore
, they should be prioritized with the benefit of accumulating the resources of their own
country
.
Secondly
, foreigners bring valuable money into the destination
country
 than native inhabitants. Tourist sites are a way to engage
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 a new culture.
Similarly
, overseas
vistors
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visitors
 should
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bear
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bare
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 in mind that
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inorder
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 to educate themselves about a new destination comes with a great cost.
This
 results in the
siginificant
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significant
 increase of the economy by
forigners
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foreigners
 purchasing
souviners
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souvenirs
 and
visitngs
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visiting
visitings
 cultural
places
 when
traveling
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. In conclusion, native residents should pay less than
forigeners
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foreigners
 for cultural and historical
attraction
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attractions
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.
Accordingly
,
non native
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 residents indirectly contribute to the welfare of a countries development by investing
into
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this
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touristic
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 sites.
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