The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit. What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is well-known that smoking is really dangerous for the health.
However
, there are many people who still enjoy
this
habit.
This
essay will try to identify the factor causing
this
and
also
explain the solution. There are various causes of people continue smoking.
Firstly
, it is due to the massive advertisement. The commercial company advertise it by having a muscular man smoking while doing some boyish activity.
For instance
, a cigarette advertisement in my country shows a guy smoking after riding a big motorcycle to pick up his girlfriend.
This
ad will give a perspective that a man that smokes is awesome.
Secondly
, as the ads show that smoking is satisfying, many people smoke whenever they are stress.
This
condition will lead to addiction.
However
, we still can cut down on
this
habit. I believe parents play an important role to educate their children how dangerous a cigarette is. Not only that, parents have to give an example of a healthy lifestyle.
For example
, my father encourages me to do physical activity since I was a kid.
Thus
, whenever I get stress, I do not think that smoking can solve the problem, but I can release my energy through sports. On top of that, I
also
know that smoking can destroy my lung. If my lung is damaged,
then
I can not perform well in sports.
Moreover
, the government should give higher taxes to cigarette company and their advertisement agency.
Although
the commercial of cigarettes is unavoidable for children, I believe we still can reduce smoking. Parents should educate their children from an early age, while the government should set higher taxes for the related stakeholders.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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