More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

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These days,
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of the most pressing issues is
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associated with the ecosystem. It is said that numbers of endangered and extinct
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have been increasing over recent years.
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both of these situations are serious problems, I believe that there are viable solutions. A decreasing number of endangered and extinct
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are caused by many reasons.
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of the major reasons is deforestation and construction.
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to say, some logging companies cut down trees for selling in the market as well as using wood for building.
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,
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have no place to live and not enough food to serve their living because of the invasion from human activities.
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of the possible solutions is that the government should bring up stricter regulations for controlling the logging companies as well as increase fines and jail terms when they break the rules.
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, another reason is that climate changes affected their habitats. Because of the changes in temperature and environment where the animal lives,
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they have to move out and find other places, which sometimes leads to extinction since some
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can not adjust themselves, and
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they are unable to reproduce.
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, a decreasing number of the White bears in the north pole,
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of the endangered
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, resulting from the rate of ice
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melting down every year, and soon to be extinct.
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of the practical solutions that can be done by the Animal Preservation Organization who can move some endangered
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to safe places which will be in the hands of scientists. To conclude,
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are an essential factor to balance the world. The government and animal institutes should collaborate in order to preserve animal’s life.
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