TASK2: Some people believe that it is a good idea to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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the Individuals
information
should be getting easily
for students, academic researchers or scientists whereas others support opposite ideas so they Replace the word
easier
convinced
that Add a missing verb
are convinced
information
is caused be
risk and misused by other Correct your spelling
by
countries
. While some argues
that it would be better Change the verb form
argue
concealing
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to conceal
information
for protecting of
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apply
countries
, I believe that everyone should be able to get information
in order to improve their labours.
There are various reasons why people believe that information
is protected due to not only abuse but also
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of
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the Countries
which
powerful do not Correct pronoun usage
that
share
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in order to inhibit Fix the agreement mistake
soldiers
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the attack
attack
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attacks
of
potential Change preposition
on
countries
. For instance
, The North Korea Government determined that never contact to
other Change preposition
apply
countries
about themselves all of year
ago. Correct article usage
a year
Therefore
, they follow isolation
life because of their safety. Replace the word
isolated
Moreover
, Some of
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Countries
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the Countries
which
have similar ideas use Correct pronoun usage
that
restrict
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to restrict
internet
and do not Correct article usage
the internet
share
videos photos or news about their lifestyle or problems of
their country.
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On the other hand
, Numerous Individuals accepted that everyone need
to get Change the verb form
needs
information
owing to their development in career or education. Similarly
, Society always addict
to learn and teach so getting Change the verb form
addicts
information
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to have
have
to be free. Change the verb form
has
In addition
to
, Some Poor Change preposition
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do not have enough Money thus
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the most
internet
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the internet
information
. Majority
of Universities Correct article usage
The majority
share
researches freely, they aim to provide information
interchange. Exemplify, Oxford and Harvard Universities give online lectures free for poor countries
students.
In conclusion, although
some of
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countries
believe that prevent Add an article
the countries
to
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sharing
share
information
for their safety, others are vice versa. I totally support share
information
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the evolution
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