You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, You realized you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. * Thank your friend for the holiday. * Explain that you left your wallet in their house. * give them instructions of how to send it back to you.

Dear Dinesh, The purpose of writing
this
letter is to tell you that
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forgot my
wallet
at your place when
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left
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there. It has all of my credit and debit cards, office access and most importantly driving license. It will be most appreciated
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if you can send it to me. Before I give instructions on sending my
wallet
back to me
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want to thank you once again for hosting me and my family for the holiday. I and my wife enjoyed your place a lot, especially your garden is so amazing. I wish I could visit your place again anywhere soon if my schedule permits me. It is easy to send my
wallet
through my friend who lives with you in the same city and visiting me
next
week. I explained everything and
also
shared your details with him
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so that he will collect my
wallet
from you
this
weekend. By the
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way I left my
wallet
in the guest room in the racks
next
to the cupboard. I'm sorry to bother you but
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will be happy if can give my
wallet
to my friend. I will let you know once
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collect it from my friend. lots of love Rahul
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  • memorable
  • grateful
  • remarkable
  • incident
  • essential
  • postage
  • courier
  • identification
  • reimburse
  • parcel
  • delivery method
  • anticipate
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