You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, You realized you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. * Thank your friend for the holiday. * Explain that you left your wallet in their house. * give them instructions of how to send it back to you.

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Dear Dinesh, The purpose of writing

this

letter is to tell you that

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forgot my

wallet

at your place when

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left

from

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there. It has all of my credit and debit cards, office access and most importantly driving license. It will be most appreciated

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if you can send it to me. Before I give instructions on sending my

wallet

back to me

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want to thank you once again for hosting me and my family for the holiday. I and my wife enjoyed your place a lot, especially your garden is so amazing. I wish I could visit your place again anywhere soon if my schedule permits me. It is easy to send my

wallet

through my friend who lives with you in the same city and visiting me

week. I explained everything and

also

shared your details with him

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so that he will collect my

wallet

from you

this

weekend. By the

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way I left my

wallet

in the guest room in the racks

to the cupboard. I'm sorry to bother you but

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will be happy if can give my

wallet

to my friend. I will let you know once

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collect it from my friend. lots of love Rahul

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

206 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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