It is impossible to help all people in the world, so governments should only focus on people in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There comes a statement that the Governments have to look after the public in their nations as it is hard to lend a hand to all the population on the Earth.Even though I see a point in it I cannot totally agree with the given idea.The aim of

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essay is to elaborate on my opinion.

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with,I am sure that not all the countries in the world are in a state to help other democracies.That means underdeveloped lands cannot help other nations financially.

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, countries like Afghanistan are not even able to provide jobs and daily needs to their own people.

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,they can not offer any help to another nation.FOr

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reason, it is important for the Governments of these types of nations to

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concentrate on improving their own conditions.

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, I am of the opinion that helping perhaps may not always be in terms of money.I mean that humans beings of even from a nation

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not that equipped can help the other by sending human help when in need.

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, Japan is a very well developed province but it is often seen suffering from earthquakes.

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a country like Afghanistan can give it a lending hand by sending the required people to Japan to pamer the suffered ones.Eventually, a humanitarian bond will be formed between the Governments.

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, they may even get financial favours from a developed province. To conclude,

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it is impossible to get monetary help from a financially lower state it can be wished to get humanitarian help from

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unions,

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, it is never impossible for any part of the world to help the other one .The essay has explained my opinion.

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It is impossible to help all people in the world, so governments should only focus on people in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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