Influence of human beings on the world’s eco system is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of biodiversity? What solutions can you suggest?
Overexploitation of natural
resourses
by human beings put Correct your spelling
resources
species
in endanger. Out of the eight million, One million species
are in
nearly Change preposition
apply
extincts
. Correct your spelling
extinct
This
is a
biggest extinction in Change the article
the
the
earth history. There are many reasons Correct article usage
apply
of
biological Change preposition
for
diversity
, we would discuss main
cause and possible solutions in Correct article usage
the main
this
essay.
Deforestation is the
one of the major Correct article usage
apply
cause
of Fix the agreement mistake
causes
bio
Correct your spelling
biodiversity
diversity
. Due to increase
of human Correct article usage
the increase
poplulation
, food and Correct your spelling
population
housuing
requirement is Correct your spelling
housing
proportionaly
uprising. Correct your spelling
proportionally
proportional
Consequentle
, Correct your spelling
Consequently
Jungles
area is decreasing.
many natural plants are being Correct article usage
the Jungles
eleminated
. Wild animals and birds have Correct your spelling
eliminated
not
place to reproduce their respective Add the particle
tonot
species
and gradually their population is decreasing. For example
, many lions have killed
in order to expand Add a missing verb
been killed
human
population. Now very few Lions have Add an article
the human
been remained
in Change to the active voice
remained
world
. Add an article
the world
Lions's
extinction would put Remove the s
Lions'
bad
Add an article
a bad
effect
on eco
cycle.
Correct article usage
the eco
Increase
in Correct article usage
An increase
the
human pollution and their necessities Correct article usage
apply
also
responsible for Add a missing verb
is also
bio
Correct your spelling
biodiversity
diversity
. Incremental numbers of vehicles on the road are responbile
for raising the carbon dioxide in Correct your spelling
responsible
environment
. Carbon dioxide Add an article
the environment
prepare
Change the verb form
prepares
green house
Correct your spelling
greenhouse
effect
and our planet's temperature is increasing consistently. Global warming would disappear species
of many plants and animals forever. This
would reverse effect
of Correct article usage
the effect
human
population . Add an article
the human
For example
, Lot of pandamic
will Correct your spelling
pandemic
panoramic
Correct your spelling
affect
effect
human life and put their life Correct your spelling
affect
on
survival risk.
I suggest forest areas must be reserved for habitats and where human interference should be Change preposition
at
neglegible
. It would be every person's moral Correct your spelling
negligible
responsiblity
to plant and grow Correct your spelling
responsibility
atleast
five Correct your spelling
at least
tree
in his life cycle. Change to a plural noun
trees
Further
, dependence on fossil fuel should be decreased and eco friendly, Add an article
an alternative
the alternative
alternative
should be invented. I Fix the agreement mistake
alternatives
emphasis
that global Replace the word
emphasise
Fix the agreement mistake
warnings
warning
should be taken seriously so that Correct your spelling
warming
species
extinction and bio
Correct your spelling
biodiversity
diversity
can be reversed.Submitted by Gurmit on
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