Influence of human beings on the world’s eco system is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of biodiversity? What solutions can you suggest?

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Overexploitation of natural

resourses

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resources

by human beings put

species

in endanger. Out of the eight million, One million

species

are

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nearly

extincts

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extinct

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biggest extinction in

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earth history. There are many reasons

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for

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biological

diversity

, we would discuss

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cause and possible solutions in

this

essay. Deforestation is

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one of the major

cause

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bio

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biodiversity

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diversity

. Due to

increase

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of human

poplulation

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population

, food and

housuing

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housing

requirement is

proportionaly

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proportionally

proportional

uprising.

Consequentle

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Jungles

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area is decreasing. many natural plants are being

eleminated

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eliminated

. Wild animals and birds have

not

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place to reproduce their respective

species

and gradually their population is decreasing.

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, many lions have

killed

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in order to expand

human

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the human

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population. Now very few Lions have

been remained

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world

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the world

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Lions's

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extinction would put

bad

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a bad

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effect

eco

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the eco

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cycle.

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the

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human pollution and their necessities

also

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responsible for

bio

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biodiversity

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diversity

. Incremental numbers of vehicles on the road are

responbile

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responsible

for raising the carbon dioxide in

environment

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the environment

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. Carbon dioxide

prepare

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green house

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greenhouse

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effect

and our planet's temperature is increasing consistently. Global warming would disappear

species

of many plants and animals forever.

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would reverse

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human

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population .

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pandamic

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pandemic

panoramic

will

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affect

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effect

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affect

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human life and put their life

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survival risk. I suggest forest areas must be reserved for habitats and where human interference should be

neglegible

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negligible

. It would be every person's moral

responsiblity

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responsibility

to plant and grow

atleast

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at least

five

tree

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in his life cycle.

Further

, dependence on fossil fuel should be decreased and eco friendly,

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an alternative

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alternative

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should be invented. I

emphasis

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that global

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warnings

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warning

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warming

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should be taken seriously so that

species

extinction and

bio

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biodiversity

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diversity

can be reversed.

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Topic Vocabulary:

biodiversity
extinction
ecosystem
deforestation
overexploitation
climate change
invasive species
regulations
sustainable
conservation
endangered species
renewable energy
carbon footprint
habitat destruction
sustainable development

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Influence of human beings on the world’s eco system is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of biodiversity? What solutions can you suggest?

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As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people say in order to prevent illness and disease,governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some countries, owning a homes rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case ? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In some countries, the role of a mother differs in some ways from the role of a father. Why do you think these differences exist? How might parental roles develop in the future?

Most high level positions in companies are filled by men eventhough the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50%female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain % of these positions to women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?