Some people claim that not enough of wastes from homes is recycled. They say that that only way to increase recycling for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
There is no doubt that only an
insufficent
amount of wastes from homes is reprocessed Correct your spelling
insufficient
instead
of fully recycling disposed materials.While some people believe that to solve this
problem, government bodies should enforce recycling products as legitimate. In this
essay, I will explain my view with an example.
One
problem is that as a human, we are producing more trash than reusing or destroying.For example
, rather than using a paper bag , many people use a plastic bag as a storage container at home.This
is an issue because even though both can be reuse but not every type of plastic can be recycled. To solve this
problem, there should be a law which
every citizen should follow which will strickly force Correct pronoun usage
that
one
not to utilize banned substances that can not be reprocessed. For instance
, there are some countries that has
Change the verb form
have
make
a Change the form of the verb
made
a
legal requirement not to use unrecyclable products.
Public Administration should Remove the redundancy
apply
also
apply a mandatory action where throwaways should seggeratte dry wastage like electronic devices,aluminium vessels,wrappers etc. from the wet waste like food,liquid stuff etc. At a
every building or household, there should be two garbage disposals , Remove the article
apply
one
for dry and another for wet objects. This
can ensure an efficient way of reprocessing and utilizing elements from disposed
components which later can be used for future redeveloping. To illustrate Add the preposition
ofdisposed
this
point, electric parts can be fixed and applied in industries or one
can develop fertilizers from disposed
foods.
In conclusion, We can make mandatory steps for making use of wasted household objects which in turn can Add the preposition
ofdisposed
also
solve an
important issues Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
such
as the
waste pollution which consequences all world is facing.But I Correct article usage
apply
also
think that we should also
educate and guide citizens, the importance of recycling.Submitted by shreyaraut1996 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite