People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example. Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.

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Nowadays the use of different kinds of

drugs

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amongst

people

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is common, but our young generation has been addicted to illegal

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even teenagers. Scientists believe that relatives and other adults often show a negative example. In

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essay, I will write about the reasons and consequences of using

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by young

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in our society.

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with, children usually repeat the

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of their relatives. Some young

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live with problem parents who are addicted to alcohol and

drugs

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. The youngsters want to look like their elder generation and start to take

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from an early age.

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scientists from the USA have done

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and it has shown that 80

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of children with

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parents start to take illegal and legal substances in school. They consider

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a normal part of

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because young

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have seen

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lifestyle since childhood.

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, drug addiction destroys

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’s lives.

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become the main aim of youngsters' existence and they spend all their time taking and searching for their stuff. The effects of

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illness lead to the fact that teenagers have no chance for proper education, entertainment and future career.

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, one of my classmates who started to use

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at an early age needs constant medical treatment and is not able to work and study. He spends all his

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fighting his drug addiction. To sum up (Summing everything up), illegal and legal substances are really dangerous for everybody, but most of all, teenagers and other young

people

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suffer from these problems. Often they do not know any other

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except the

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with

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. Due to

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youngsters lose their chances to get a good job and become successful.

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Topic Vocabulary:

glorification
peer pressure
coping mechanism
cognitive development
risky behaviors
trafficking
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parental involvement
mental health services
escapism
societal impact
substance abuse
preventative measures
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