Individuals can do nothting to improve the environment only government and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
It widely believed that protecting the situation is beyond the power of individual citizens, and the corporations and
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issue. I strongly disagree with this
point of view, as I believe that individual actions
can together contribute to positive environmental change,
while persuading ministry and companies to protect the natural world.
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can create positive environmental change by working together as a community. Fix the agreement mistake
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is because the effects of many miniature actions
quickly add up. For example
, if each person in a large city chose to walk or take the bus instead
of driving for one day a week, the reduction in air pollution would be huge. While it is true that one person acting alone cannot make much difference, many individuals talking the
same action can have a dramatic positive effect.
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Furthermore
, the actions
of individuals can also
influence government and corporations, due to the fact that people have power as both citizens and consumers. For instance
, they can organize social media campaigns or boycott certain products which are detrimental to the environment . While there is no question that governments and mammoth companies must play a vital role in protecting the natural world, it is clear that human being
and communities can put pressure on these organisations to act.
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have a positive effect on government and corporations. In my opinion, everyone has a responsibility to care for the surroundingsSubmitted by Tuly Saha on
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