Some people believe that children are given too much free time.They feel that this time should be used to do more school work. How do you think children shoul spend their time?

In every country, we all have different views and different opinions about what is the best

Education

model. We have seen a

lot

of

controversy

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, especially including Physical

Education

classes

during

time

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to school or not. In

this

essay, we will discuss

differents

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opinions from both sides.

Firstly

, as said often,

sport

is very important for health. It may avoid major

problem

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such

as cardiovascular

diseas

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disease

or

artherosclerosis

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atherosclerosis

. In order to have good academics grades. It has been proved that

sport

is useful

keeping

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students

active as much physically than mentally. When you are feeling good in your body, your brain feels healthy as well and do not struggle to learn. Obviously, doing

sport

doesn't

makes

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you smarter but, it makes

children

more dynamics and motivated to achieve many goals. Indeed, when we are doing

sport

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we activate a brain's area which is linked

whith

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with

perseverance and abilities to work longer . It might

also

help against overweight which is

a

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main problem in a

lot

of countries like in the USA.

On the other hand

,

this

view has some

faillures

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failures

. Whereas

children

are running or doing any

sport

, they do not study academic subjects. Some people

also

think that it is up to parents to make their

children

sporty.

However

, some parents are working too much, or don't have enough money to pay for a

lot

of activities

to

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their

children

. There is

also

the fact that doing

sport

makes

students

exhausted and it is sometimes worse. If

students

run for two hours and

then

they need to stay focused on a tricky mathematics demonstration, it might be difficult to follow. To conclude Physical

Education

classes

have a

lot

of benefits and drawbacks, it is good for health but it can tired

students

or take too much

time

on their school

time

. I believe that we need to have both academic subjects and Physical

Education

classes

, but it must be thought smartly in the

time table

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. We must learn academics subject

on

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the morning and sometimes, have some Physical

Education

classes

on

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the afternoon, in order to keep away stress or anxiety.