In the past, when students did a University degree, they tend to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and advantages of this development.

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their studies in their own country, nowadays many of them have a tendency to get their higher education abroad. In the forthcoming

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both advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, there is a myriad of disadvantages to

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, when students tend to go out of their native country in the order to do a University degree it can impose a vast number of pressures both mentally and financially on families who cannot afford it.

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we might be faced with a serious problem called brain-drain in the long run, which is likely to happen especially in underdeveloped countries, where people are in poor conditions in terms of curriculum levels.

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educators

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with a high level of depression that can be triggered by feeling

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there.

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drastic sustainable prosperities are brought by people who graduating from overseas colleges.

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, when graduates come back to their place they are full of knowledge that can enhance the literacy rate.

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, the government can take advantage of them in different industries, which can be a great help for the whole society.

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being educated from

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may lead them to gaining

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, which they really deserve to, and

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of which can improve their quality of life and well-being. In conclusion,

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there is a variety of drawbacks to studying abroad,

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as imposing financial pressure on families, facing brain-drain phenomenon, and depression, there are some benefits too, which consists of increasing their knowledge, welfare, and helping industries, so from my standpoint its benefits far outweigh the demerits.

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In the past, when students did a University degree, they tend to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and advantages of this development.

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