The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern life style. What are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In nowadays fast meals has become a trend and developed rapidly, some
people
say
this
development suits these days busy lifestyle
also
it brings benefits to
people
such
as efficiency, variety of they are choosing and makes life easier.
This
essay is going to discuss the pros and cons of the fast and give my opinion. There are several advantages to convenience meals.
First
of all, it makes
people
save time
thus
they can enhance the
work
effectively.
For example
, these days
people
are busier at
work
so they have sort lunch break than in the old days.
Therefore
, fast food can satisfy them to have a quick lunch in a short time
then
get back to
work
thus
increasing their
work
efficiency.
Moreover
, as these kinds of foods developed as a trend, as a
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result there are a lot of different fast on the market which mean
people
has more choices to select their meals.
On the other hand
, there are some cons of convenience foods.
To begin
with,
this
type of food might lead
people
to overweight easily because fast food normally contains more fat than a traditional meal. So,
people
might obtain a great amount of fat if they eat it frequently,
thus
lead them to have health problems easier.
In addition
, it might lead us lost our traditional diet culture soon in the near future. In conclusion,I believe that fast foods bring benefits that outweigh than disadvantages to our life if we eat
them
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wisdom.
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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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