You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. One of your pen pals will shortly be visiting your city. For some reasons, you can not manage to meet him at the airport on time. Write a letter asking him to wait for you at the airport and tell him how to identify you.

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Hi Emma, I hope you have a good trip to Auckland. As we know, you will arrive at the airport tomorrow at 4 p.m. I wish you would enjoy travelling here. Due to your arrival time, I need to let you know that I cannot probably pick you up on time because my meeting with customers will finish at about 4.30 p.m. It would be great

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if you can wait for me in the Starbucks where locates in front of KFC. It is easy to find. You can take a rest there.

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, when I arrive

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the entrance, I will give you a call immediately.

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, you should come out and meet me at door 1. One thing that you need to remember is my car colour. It is dark blue and Mini Cooper brand. By the way, I know that we have never met each other.

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, you can recognize me from my hairstyle, I have long hair with blond colour and am of medium height. If you cannot find it, please look around you. I will wave my hand and call your name. Best regards, Jameekorn

Submitted by jameekorn.insawang on Sun Aug 22 2021

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

189 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The world is consuming natural resources faster than they can be renewed. Therefore, it is important that products are made to last. Governments should discourage people from constantly buying more up to date or fashionable products. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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