Young people in the modern world seem to have more power and influence than any previous young generation. Why is this the case? What impact does this have on the relationship between old and young people? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

In the modern era, technology affects human life. Curious young generations welcome new technology and start using it to ease their work. Today young
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but the increase of
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in the society
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matching between new
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. Let's discuss why are youths more energetic and
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influence
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? Modern youths have been well adopted fast communications devices computers, mobile phones. They are more
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synchronized
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example, one's can know the market trend and
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that what would happen in the future. In the previous time, Normally it depends only on the television or Radio News. Body Parag- Use technology like computer, mobile, smart working than hardworking Body - smart working than hardworking,Fast life, give value to time
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