Nowadays there is an increase in social problems involving young people because more parents spent time at work than with their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a gradual increase in the number of social dilemmas involving young
people
as more parents
spend their time at work rather than with their children
.Children
are naive and require parental guidance even if they have grown up.I agree with the fact that children
get involved socially when parents
do not pay attention to them.
Firstly
,young people
, these days are very impulsive ,energetic and hot-blooded.They tend to like to try new things.When young people
do not get love, care and attention from family members at home they tend to seek it from outside. And, it is a well-known fact that friends are considered to be great influencers of all time. Pressure from friends can sometimes lead to devastating effects. For instance
,trying dangerous drugs like LSD , heroin or even cocaine or even trying to taste new alcoholic drinks which can take a toll on an individual's life. This
can make a person an addict and can cause a lot of health issues like depression , damage to one's liver or even cause damage to your nervous system.
In order to prevent young people
from falling into the trap of the above-mentioned problems,it is necessary for parents
to know what is happening in their children
's life.Parents
should talk to them on a daily basis and find out if they are facing any difficulties or complications. They should educate youngsters about the difference between what is right and wrong. The difference between good and bad is a very fine line that people
often tend to forget but constant reminders about it would help them keep a check on it moreover
parents
have to spend quality time like, by spending the weekend at home , going out for lunch or even planning short trips.This
helps in developing bonds and trust.
In conclusion,it is necessary for parents
to maintain a balance between their professional and family life because children
are considered to be the ultimate treasure.Submitted by arv_70 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
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Linking word examples:
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- thirdly
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- moreover
- also
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- for instance
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- however
- although
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