Many students find it difficult to learn subjects like mathematics and philosophy and hence they should be optional in schools. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Learning at school is a passage where everyone
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through.
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, it is not easy for all of us, some subjects
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as mathematics or philosophy might be difficult to deal with.
Then
, it has been supported that these topics should be optional in schools. In
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essay, we will discuss my point of view. Mastering in classes has always been a tricky thing, especially in courses where we need to demonstrate or think outside of the box.
For instance
, having huge abilities in mathematical thinking, be able to do some complex
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arguments
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is not obvious for every student. Fortunately, in undergraduate
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classes
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only
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to have the
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of mathematics. Indeed, most of the teachers ask to know, geometric, a little bit of analysis and rules of demonstration. In philosophy, building
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with an accurate structure is not able for everyone. For a clear example, it is often asked to find solutions
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abstract questions . As students are young, they have sometimes
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enough experiences to write a deep answer, which may lead to bad marks. In despite, during
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year of learning, I believe that some
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are crucial for pupils, I would include the
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On the other hand
, during college, I believe that the best thing to do is to let
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learning whatever they want.
For example
, some of them will prefer science, others
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literature
or even history. Everybody
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in different departments ,
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it is more profitable to provide subjects which interest them.
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think that we all have many skills in a large range of topics, so in my mind, pupils should all learn the same base during
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school, but after they might
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topics they are interested in.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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